My name is Leanna.
Inherited from Grandma Anna.
It is an old English name
Without much fame.
It is pronounced "Lee-Ann-Uh",
But most see it as "Lee-Ahh-Nah".
Sometimes shortened to Leanne,
Which is not my biggest fan.
My family calls me Lee;
But that is okay because it fits me.
One meaning is "lioness",
Which I often get compared to.
Another is "a beautiful women"
And that is definition two.
I have blue eyes and brown hair;
I can be as sweet as honey,
And I often share.
My middle name is Victoria
Which comes from the British Queen Victoria.
The meaning is victory,
But all this is history.
We are alike in the same way,
By wanting to be
The "Queen Bee",
And have people listen to what we say.
My last name is Torres
It came from a time way before us.
A tropical potion,
From across the Antlantic Ocean.
That is the key,
to explain parts of me.
Therefore, I will be,
The best Leanna Victoria Torres I can be.
Good job I really liked it !!!! ^_^
ReplyDeleteVery creative!! I liked how you compared yourself to Queen Victoria:)
ReplyDeleteI liked how you gave each part of your name a stanza.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you went and described all parts of your name and not just your first name
ReplyDeleteGood job I liked your rhyming and how you explained the potion ocean part when you were done
ReplyDeleteLol u read really fast. Ur poem was unique and creative lol.
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DeleteI really liked your rhyme scheme , it was very catchy . Good job (:
ReplyDeleteI liked how you said a tropical potion from across the Atlantic Ocean. I thought it was really unique.
ReplyDeleteI liked the rhyme scheme and all of your historical references. I also liked the little bit about where you are from.
ReplyDeleteLeanna, awesome job! Do you think you will pass down your name to your children?
ReplyDeleteI like how you explained the potion, and your poem was amazing and fun! I also liked your "Queen Bee" analogy. Very unique!!!
ReplyDeleteI liked where you said "the meaning is victory, but all this is history"
ReplyDeleteThat rhyming was great! I also loved how you talked about your full name and not just your first name. You made the poem very creative.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you said that puerto rica was a tropical potion. Very well written (:
ReplyDeleteNice rhyme scheme, it flowed nicely. I liked the part about about how you said you want to be queen bee.
ReplyDeleteI loved your ending when you said you'll be the best Leanna Victoria Torres you can be (:
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